Thank you for the effort that will be put into this publication.
You probably might well know this, but the best advice I could give you, is to try and past tense timings with a specific date. What i meant by that was, there was much previous historic literature that has said something like:
"this species emerges in August", but after many years and climate change, a wonderer with an old book just came across one butterfly left from that brood, on it's last leg!

I hope that your book will have longevity, and will lead, pushing forward some new "Species protection laws", that are not just associated with the Imago,
Kind regards.